Family Brooke always eat Breakfast together. After Breakfast boy named Leon went to school. On the way, he met his best friend John and they went to school. Pope Leon, a teacher in his school. and they both met there. While everybody in the school, mother with her younger daughter cleaned up around the house. After school, boys Leon and John played ball. Then they went into the pool. After the pool, Leon walks his dog. For dinner, the whole family gathered. In the evening the family watching TV. And all went to bed later

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The Brookes always have a breakfast together. After breakfast boy, whos name is Leon went to school. On the way, he met his best friend John and they went to school. Leon's father is a teacher at his school and they both met there. While everybody are at school, mother with her younger daughter cleaned up around the house. After school, boys Leon and John played ball. Then they went into the pool. After the pool, Leon walked his dog. For dinner, the whole family gathered. In the evening the family watched TV. And all went to bed later

все в простом прошедшем времени!