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I would like to have a red Volkswagen car. This car is very comfortable and beautiful. When I grow up, I'll buy it.

Русский перевод:

Я бы хотел иметь красную машину марки Фольксваген. Эта машина очень удобная и красивая. Когда я вырасту, я её куплю.

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I have always dreamt of a car. A fast red glossy Ferrari that will take me anywhere. It's multifunctional, big, speedy, very modern and cool. First and the most important role of the car is driving to work and back, I will use it to travel long distances. In my opinion, cars give people a feeling of freedom and comfort. Unfortunately, I am too young to have a car. However, once I grow up I will make my wish come to life!