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In our time, money plays a significant role. They control the people, but make us happier. I am not a materialist, but I think that money in our time is very important. To get an apartment, a car, obespesit your family need a lot of work. Material things make us reach his goal going forward. It's good. We must strive to dream, but do not forget about humanity, love and friendship.