Небольшой рассказ про обезьяну 2 класс, 5-6 предложений

Last week my family went to our local zoo. There I saw many funniest animals, but only a monkey called Lila, impressed me very much! Lila is 4 years old. Most of all she prefers tasty bananas. In the zoo she has many friends as tigers, lions, horses. I think I will visit her again

В пред ответе много ошибок очень, но в моем тексте исп времена и конструкции, которые в 2 м классе не проходят