Планирование или не планирование личного времени

сочинение на англ, желательно своими словами

Planning personal time

Be able to plan your day - is very important. Every adult should be able to do it. I'll tell you about my plan for the usual day.

I get up at 6:50, I go wash up and brush my teeth. Then I have a breakfast. I leave my house at 8:00 and go to school. Lessons begin at 8:30 am. I spend at school 6 hours. Lessons finishes at 14:10. I get home, have dinner and go by bus to tutor. I get home at 18:00, and I go to do my homework. Homework takes me 5 hours. Then I go to the bathroom, and then go to bed.

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