Write a narrative using your plan:

paragraph1:Set the scene? Where were you? When? Who were you with?

p2:lead-up. what happend just before? what did you see/think?

p3:main event. what happend? how did you feel?

p4:the ending. what happend in the end? how did you feel afterwards? how did people reacnt?

write 220-250 words and try to include some time expressions

bout year ago in vacations, me and my best friend Mike went to the Grand Kanion to jump with a parachute! It was his birthday, so the circumstances were exceptional. First I was very scared, but he told me "You only live once!" and he was with me all the time so i felt better. When we stood on the edge of thought that is very high and dangerous. I saw only rocks and the gap. After the inventory, I felt that I no longer starting. And then I heard the command to jump. I closed my eyes and jumped! I felt amazing. Free as a bird. After landing, I could not for a long time to recover, but in a good way. I want to do it again and I think everyone should try, because it's totally awesome.